Saturday, September 26, 2015

Book Review: Reich by Drew Avera

Summary

Germany is all that's left of the world after radiation destroyed the rest of the world at the close of World War II. The Aryan Empire is going strong, kept safe and consistent with protection from the Enforcers. In a sea of blond, fair-complexioned Germans, Mikael is dark and knows he doesn't fit in. When he starts to see ripples in the sky, he knows something is up. His discovery leads Germany down a path that can only end in truth and blood.

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from Amazon

In the 158 years after Hitler's death (AH158), Germany has become the utopian state that he had originally envisioned. The Aryan Dynasty has conquered the free world at the cost of billions of lives. Hitler has become the patriarch of a new religious fervor, one that even he did not see coming. The wastelands that surround Germany are the only threat awaiting the German citizens. That is at least what everyone is taught. This is a story of how misplaced power can lead to tyranny, but it could be Germany that falls victim to a new Reich.

Context

This is an alternate history that pits present-day in a world where Hitler won and founded the new dynasty he envisioned. Other than the mention of a year (158 years since his death), there's not a whole lot pinning the setting to a particular point in time, whether the 1990s even through to now. Computers are fairly capable, but not prominent, and technology is able to connect global communications apparently at the click of a few buttons.

The premise itself is what grabbed my attention. I was curious to see what Hitler's utopia looked like, at least in one author's eyes.

Style

Avera's style is simplistic... and it pains me to say unpolished. There were a myriad of typos and wrong words in Reich, such as "vile" instead of "vial" to describe a small container of liquid. A number of technical choices were poorly realized in my opinion, such as (SPOILER ALERT) the POV characters in the first two chapters ending up dead at the end of their chapters. That's right, spend a chapter with this character, and he dies at the end. Chapter two, spend a chapter with a new character, and at the end of the chapter, he ends up dead, too. By the third chapter and third POV, I was expecting the whole book to go that way.


My Thoughts

This book had a lot of promise. A lot. The author has a lot of potential, but I have to say that potential is far from reached with Reich. The concept was intriguing, but most other elements were lacking, making for an overall poorly presented package. I wanted this story to be good. I wanted it to grab me, but I'm afraid it did not. We barely even see what the utopia is like before things are getting torn down, and events, pacing, and characters are far from believable.

There was a lot I had issue with as far as believeability. Apparently millions die, but the biggest the strike force ever gets mentioned as being is like 67 people. Granted, there's mention of uprisings all over Germany, but when the main force is that tiny, there's no way things will succeed. The battles we see are pitifully fast and far too easy despite the characters freaking out about the odds and whether they're going to survive. There's really no sense of risk here. Partly, I was unable to care about any of the characters. They seemed to be cardboard cutouts with names.

That and the ending didn't resolve anything. The book was far from finished, and it just stopped.

I apologize if this seems harsh or cruel. I really do. The fact that I read to the end speaks for Avera's potential as an author.

Would I Recommend This Book? I'm afraid not. There's a lot to be desired, and even though Reich is a very quick read (about an hour for me), it leaves too much to be desired to take the time to read it. I would love to see Avera develop the idea with a more established writer or a professional editor and give it more length and depth. I think he could really have something. I give Reich an Aryan 2 of 5 stars.

Book Review: The Ninth Wind by Moses Siregar III

Summary
The three children of Jurg and Aesa watched as the Rezzians massacred their people, poisoned their father, and killed their mother. All this to weaken them so they wouldn't be able to fight back while the Rezzians warred with Pawelon. Now, grown up, Skye, Dag, and Idonea are determined to get their vengeance on Queen Lucia or Rezzia. The believe the Rezzians will return in the spring. Idonea will do anything, even study the feared magic of the volwa, to see her people safe. Will her brothers accept her secret? Will they help?

More importantly, will she be able to kill Queen Lucia and turn her ten gods' eyes away from Andars once and for all?

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from Amazon

The Ancestors whisper of rebellion, their breath a cold blue wind in the forests and hills of Andars. The Rezzian occupation lingers, dragging the folk of the hills through bitterness and despair.

Three siblings stand ready to challenge the Kingdom of Rezzia. Their fates have long been seen by the primordial Orns: one by Angst, one by Fidelity, one by Wrath.

Idonea searches the dark wood to master the magic of the three sacred trees. Skye pursues omens to lead his shield-brothers to victory over Rezzia's legions. As armies battle for control of the Andaran hills, Dag calls out so that he may become as impenetrable as Altrea, allowing nothing to bend him, or turn him, or break him, so that he may stand and defend his kin. The ten gods of Rezzia and their lions stand in his way.
Context
The Ninth Wind takes place over the course of some years as the children of Jurg grow up, but the bulk of the real action takes place about four years after the prequel to this trilogy (The Black God's War- check out my review here). Events that happened in that book are referenced here, but are not needed to fully understand this novel. It's keenly done, actually. A reader could pick up The Black God's War first and then follow with this, or could read The Ninth Wind first and then pick up the other, and I can't say which would be the better experience. I deeply want to go bakc and read The Black God's War (or at least part of it), just to fully take in one of the most important connective tissues between these two books.

Style
You can check out my style section for Moses Siregar in my review of The Black God's War here.

My Thoughts
I formed a love/hate relationship with The Ninth Wind pretty early on. I adore Siregar's world from my reading of The Black God's War. It's so refreshingly different from the bulk of fantasy that I've read, but there are still hints of cultures from our world that I enjoy finding. Some of the characters from TBGW are in this book, although in secondary or even tertiary roles, and they're still themselves, although changed by the events of the previous books. My favorite character from TBGW is still my favorite here, though he's rarely seen. None of the new characters eclipsed him. It made me wish I saw more of him, but that's a wish denied.
The "hate" part of this relationship came in that failed attachment to the newer characters, particularly Idonea. I couldn't connect with her. I had a hard time with Skye and Dag, too, with my best relationship being with Dag. But even that wasn't friend so much as acquaintance. This isn't meant as a failing of Siregar's writing or characterization. He writes well. I just didn't connect personally with the main characters. I'm much more intrigued by Pawelon myself. It happens. People are different. There are many readers who, I think, will connect strongly with Idonea, Skye, and Dag. I just didn't.
Yes, I do plan to read more of the series as it releases. Yes, I hope to see more of Pawelon and its people. Do I hate the Andars? No. Do I dread another book featuring them (if that happens)? Not really. The epilogue brought on a level on intrigue I didn't see coming that did have me clamoring for more.

Would I Recommend This Book? Sure! It wasn't my biggest cup of tea, but I still enjoyed it. It's a tapestry of vibrant colors and intriguing characters, and Siregar does them great service by writing them. It was a bit of a slog for me to get through, but some books are like that. I give The Ninth Wind an ancestral 4 of 5 stars.

For more information on the author, visit http://sciencefictionfantasybooks.net/about/

Saturday, September 12, 2015

Triple Whammy Book Review: The Solider Son Trilogy by Robin Hobb

Shaman’s Crossing

Summary

Every moment of Nevare Burvelle’s life has been planned. As the second son of a nobleman, he’s destined to be a soldier. He’ll attend the King’s Cavalla Academy to learn to be an officer. He’ll serve, and eventually, he will marry the woman his parents have chosen for him. Nevare has never been one to question the lot in life his religion has laid out for him. But part of the training his father has arranged for him is to learn from Dawarra, a Plainsman and an enemy of Nevare’s kingdom. Dawarra’s people were conquered recently, beaten back so the king could expand his territory. Dawarra has no love for Nevare’s family, since it was Nevare’s own father who shot Dawarra with an iron bullet, robbing him of magic. The plainsman teaches Nevare survival and other useful things, but he has his own plans. He takes Nevare into a dream-like world, planning to use him to redeem Dawarra’s own failings against another enemy of the Plains People. But Nevare’s training in courtesy and the cavalla’s honor code prevent him from attacking this enemy, an old woman. Now, she has taken something from him and left her mark. Nevare finds himself doubting his actions. Is he who he’s supposed to be? Who does he have to blame for his failings but himself? What is it his cousin sees when she tricks him into a seance?

And worse, is the plague that hits the Academy and the surrounding city his fault?

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://www.robinhobb.com/

Nevare Burvelle was destined from birth to be a soldier. The second son of a newly anointed nobleman, he must endure the rigors of military training at the elite King’s Cavella Academy—and survive the hatred, cruelty, and derision of his aristocratic classmates—before joining the King of Gernia’s brutal campaign of territorial expansion. The life chosen for him will be fraught with hardship, for he must ultimately face a forest-dwelling folk who will not submit easily to a king’s tyranny. And they possess an ancient magic their would-be conquerors have long discounted—a powerful sorcery that threatens to claim Nevare Burvelle’s soul and devastate his world once the Dark Evening brings the carnival to Old Thares.

Context

The world surrounding Nevare and his life is a lush one, full of societies at odds with one another. The Plains People hate the Specks, the neighboring people of Lansing have taken a good deal of coastal territory from Nevare’s king, the king’s military have fought back the Plains People, and worse, now there is civil unrest among Nevare’s people. King Trovan elevated some of the most prominent soldiers to lords, giving them lands in the newly-conquered territory despite the protests of his old noble families. It is a stressful time to be a growing soldier-in-training. The world turns, and Nevare is having enough trouble dealing with what’s going on in his own little world without having to worry about what his position will be like once he’s a schooled officer.

There’s more than enough conflict in Nevare’s own life to deal with, but that isn’t stopping the world from turning around him. If that isn’t real life, I don’t know what is.

Style

Hobb’s writing style meshes so well with my reading style that it’s scary. Hobb is no stranger to giving description and playing with the senses, but where she really wins— at least in my opinion— is in dialogue and introspection. The interactions Nevare has with both friends and rivals at the Academy are stellar. Even better, her words really put the reader into Nevare’s head. It’s difficult not to be Nevare, even if he’s not at all like the reader. I am not one for the blind faith Nevare has, but during the course of the book, I found myself sinking further and further into just being him. Even if you don’t agree with him, you cannot help but understand him.

I wouldn’t call Hobb’s writing style simplistic by any means. It’s not overly flowery, though. It’s suitable. It’s perfect for the world she’s built. She gives what is needed for the story, what’s appropriate for the telling. Honestly, it feels to me like it was written by Nevare himself rather than someone else. The whole of this novel is stunning, really. The world is as it is, and Hobb has written it so cunningly that I, as a reader, did not feel like I was looking through a window at it. It’s not strange, because it is home. That is a feat difficult to reproduce. Any anachronisms of Nevare’s world compared to my own are nonexistent. When I’m reading the book, I am there. It’s that simple.

My Thoughts

I cannot gush enough about how I love this book. I first read it a few years ago, but as my own life and views have changed, I wondered if it was as good as I remembered. What a fool I was for doubting. With this one novel, Hobb easily joins the list of authors to admire and study. I can tell you from experience reading a fair few other novels that she more than earns and keeps that place. She’s one of my favorite authors for a reason.

For this novel alone, I can’t help but feel awe and admiration. It’s a bold foundation for the trilogy, making a world so complete in itself that it almost makes my own perceptions of my world seem false. The awareness Nevare has of what’s going on around him, whether from his own perceptions or what he learns from others, is staggering. Just what his world does to him, how civil changes in his lifetime try to stamp him and others like him down while faith urges him to persevere, is astonishing. Robb has crafted a setting and population that are so real it’s almost unfathomable. And at the same time, it’s only right that it should all be this way. It doesn’t feel like a novel. It feels like we’ve just received a real story from another world… and I for one am grateful to have it. It is, to put it simply, masterfully crafted and worth a read. So what are you waiting for?

Would I Recommend This Book? Highly. Hobb has crafted a full world and fitting characters with real thoughts and souls. The balance between Nevare’s personal struggles and the world’s drains on him is masterfully handled, and the story itself is just amazing. I give Shaman’s Crossing a newly-raised 5 of 5 stars.

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Forest Mage

Summary

The Speck Plague decimated the ranks of the Gernian military and the Academy Nevare Burvelle attends. In the aftermath, life is looking up. Many of the plague's survivors are shadows of what they once were, skeletal and weaker than the strong young men they used to be. Nevare, on the other hand, is doing very well in his recovery. In fact, he's having an opposite reaction. Nevare is putting on weight, fast. His uniform is getting tighter, and despite still being active and eating standard rations, he continues to add girth.

His weight gain is cause for great concern and disappointment from his father. Determined to get Nevare back into a suitable state of fitness, he all but imprisons and starves Nevare. But the weight gain continues. The magic that made Nevare give the sign to release the Speck Plague isn't done with him, it seems. It's holding onto him and not letting go. Nevare's continued fight with the magic seems set on burning Nevare's life behind him. The Specks are looking for him, tempting him to join them. They seem to have answers.

The forest is calling Nevare.

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://www.robinhobb.com/

Plague has ravaged the prestigious King’s Cavalla of Gernia, decimating the ranks of both cadets and instructors. Yet Nevare Burvelle has made an astonishingly robust recovery, defeating his sworn nemesis while in the throes of the disease and freeing himself—he believes—from the Speck magic that infected him. And now he is journeying home to Widevale, anticipating a tender reunion with his beautiful fiancĂ©e, Carsina, and a bright future as a commissioned officer.
But there is no haven in the bosom of his kinfolk, for his nights are haunted by grim visions of treachery—and his days are tormented by a strange side-effect of the plague that shames his family and repulses the lady of his heart. And as the still-potent magic in his blood roars to life, Nevare realizes a terrible truth: that the enemy who seeks to destroy everything he loves dwells perhaps not without but within him.

Context

Forest Mage follows right on the heels of the events of Shaman's Crossing. Even so, things have changed in Gernia. The changes in the world around Nevare are extensive but make perfect sense. Hobb clearly put a lot of thought into how things happen in this world. Even the necessary recap of events from the first book are so skillfully handled that it's almost unnoticeable. She brings readers back up to speed flawlessly, without it dragging down the narrative of the new book beginning.

The world both expands and shrinks during the courst of Forest Mage. The reader can expect to learn more about history and current events in Gernia, while at the same time, Nevare's world grows smaller. His future is dimming, the poosibilities of his life dying out thanks to what's happening to his body. It's stunning how well Hobb centers an entire world around one little piece without him getting lost, and without the world moving without him.

Style

Hobb's style is dramatic, intimate, exciting, pensive, and a lot of other adjectives all rolled into one. She is a joy to read. I would say the only criticism I can make is that we are all too often lost in Nevare's thoughts and have to be brought back out of it for events to go on. Even with that, her ability to bring things back to motion is startling. The variety of ways she eases back from musings to conversation or activity is masterful, at the least. This is a criticism, but it isn't much of one. We are in Nevare's head for this book, it's that simple. We are with him, and it is very easy to just stay in his head, to follow the train of his thoughts and forget there is a world outside of him. Hobb makes it all too easy to become Nevare. In a good way.

My Thoughts

This isn't my first time reading Forest Mage, but it is my first time really giving it enough thought to review it. I don't know that I can be disappointed with Hobb's works. It just doesn't seem like a possibility for me. The balance of introspection and activity makes this book a true first-person wonder. The richness of the world around Nevare rivals our own world. Gernia is a real place. It's that simple. It's just a different reality from ours. Forest Mage truly feels like Hobb has traveled to that place, plucked a book from their world, and brought it back for us to enjoy. This is simply a masterpiece of storytelling, and one I am pleased to have uncovered.
Fantasy lovers, Hobb is well worth your time. I promise it. 

Would I Recommend This Book?  Most definitely. Hobb's genius plot, lifelike characters, and real conflict are magnified by her amazing writing style, making this a book to read and enjoy over and over. It's a fitting and intriguing continuation of the enthralling foundation set by the first book. I give Forest Mage a walking 5 of 5 stars.

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Renegade's Magic

Summary

The magic finally did it. Nevare has been fighting the magic too long and too hard, and now it's cut all his ties from his life and driven him away from the world he's known. Now, subject to the other half of his soul, Soldier's Boy, Nevare can only ride along as his other half works with the Speck people to drive away the Gernians from their lands. Living as a Speck, nevare watching Soldier's Boy use his body to try and destroy Nevare's own people.

But which people are really his? Soldier's Boy is half of him. Is Nevare really a Speck or a Gernian? Is the Speck attack going to work? Will he finally do what the magic wants and drive the Gernians away? What about his cousin and best friend who are in the settlement the Specks plan to attack? Will there be anything left of Gettys?

Will there be anything left of Nevare?

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://www.robinhobb.com/

Loyal, privileged, and brave, Nevare Burvelle proudly embraced his preordained role as soldier in the service of the King of Gernia—unaware of the strange turns his life would ultimately take. Exposed to a plague of enemy sorcery that felled many of his compatriots, he prevailed, but at a terrible cost to his soul, body, and heart. Now he stands wrongly accused of unspeakable crimes—including murder, the most heinous of them all.
Condemned by his brother soldiers and sentenced to death, Nevare has no option but to escape. Suddenly he is an outcast and a fugitive—a hostage to the Speck magic that shackles him to a savage alter ego who would destroy everything Nevare holds dear. With nowhere to turn—except, perhaps, to the Speck woman Lisana, the enemy whom he loves—he is mired in soul-rending despair. But from out of the darkness comes a bright spark of hope.
Perhaps, somehow, the hated magic that has long abused Nevare can be used by him instead. Could he not learn to wield this mighty weapon for his own purposes rather than be enslaved by it? But down what perilous road will this desperate new quest lead him? And what will be the outcome and the ultimate new incarnation of Nevare Burvelle?

Context

Again, Hobb masterfully recaps the last book, fitting it seamlessly into the continuing narrative of Nevare's story. Renegade's Magic begins right after the last events of Forest Mage. So much happens in the first few days after the book starts that it's easy to lose track of how much time has passed. That's perfect for the reader, since Nevare loses track, too. She does an amazing job getting us into Nevare's point of view, so that we're only building that connection as the trilogy goes on. She really transports the reader into Nevare's world and head.

Style

Hobb's writing is clean. It's that simple. She is a masterful plotter, and she clearly had a well-defined plan for how this trilogy would play out. She ties up plot points, brings in details from the very beginning of the first book to wrap up the ending, and everything has a place in the final moments of the third book. It is well worth applause, in my opinion. There is nothing wasted in this trilogy, making for a very satisfying conclusion that is a joy to read.

My Thoughts

Hobb is a master. This is a perfectly self-contained work that hints at a world full of stories. Honestly, I would love more, not necessarily from Nevare. She wrapped up his arc well. But this world is so rich that I want more of it. Hobb's craftsmanship and writing style make this an amazing journey with an ending that does not disappoint while still leaving the future open to interpretation. What needs to end ends, questions are answered, more questions raised, but I think the new questions are best left to the reader's imagination. Hobb has made an excellent end to a masterpiece of a trilogy, one that I feel does not have a weak book at all in it like some trilogies do. She truly is one of the best.

Would I Recommend This Book?  A thousand yeses. There isn't a bad or disappointing moment in this book, from a reader's standpoint. I'm not talking plot, because this book is full of disappointments for Nevare. Hobb has so wonderfully brought the reader into Nevare's head throughout that I felt like it was my story. I was a part of it. Nevare's thoughts were my own, even though I am not much like him at all. And this ending... it couldn't have gone any other way. I give Renegade's Magic a fiery 5 of 5 stars.

As for the trilogy as a whole, nothing less than a full Gernian 5 of 5 stars will do. This is a winning trilogy by a fantastic author. If you like fantasy and have not read Hobb, do it.

For more information on the author, visit http://www.robinhobb.com/

Sunday, August 30, 2015

Book Review: Ghost Train to New Orleans by Mur Lafferty

Summary

Zoe Norris managed to survive her first job as editor for The Shambling Guide to New York City, a travel guide for Coterie-- vampires, zombies, sprites, gods, and all other manner of supernatural creatures. Despite being a human, she's good at her job and does manage to hold her own with creatures that see her mostly as food. Now, she and her team are heading out of town to start researching their next project: a travel guide for New Orleans.

But things aren't great. Zoe's adventures in New York have revealed her to be a City Talker, a rare sort of human Coterie. Now, she has a secret, and people are out for City Talkers' blood. Her blood.

There's a reason City Talkers are rare. Is Zoe about to become food? All she wants is to write a book!

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://murverse.com/

Zoe Norris writes travel guides for the undead. And she’s good at it too — her new-found ability to talk to cities seems to help. After the success of The Shambling Guide to New York City, Zoe and her team are sent to New Orleans to write the sequel.
Work isn’t all that brings Zoe to the Big Easy. The only person who can save her boyfriend from zombism is rumored to live in the city’s swamps, but Zoe’s out of her element in the wilderness. With her supernatural colleagues waiting to see her fail, and rumors of a new threat hunting city talkers, can Zoe stay alive long enough to finish her next book?

For this author's Context and Style sections, see my reviews for The Shambling Guide for New York City and The Afterlife Series)

My Thoughts

I listened to the podcast version of this book, just to put that out there. I liked this book, but it felt... underfinished. I never got a real serious sense of urgency at any point during it, even when things were at their worst for Zoe. I'm wondering if that may be in part because even though Lafferty narrated, and I do like her voice and her writing podcast, I don't really get much emotion out of her when she narrates. I don't recall having this issue when I listened to The Shambling Guide to New York City, but then it has been some time since I listened to it. I do, though, know that this lack of real risk has been an issue with other stories of hers I've read.

Even so, there's a lot of good stuff going on here. I love her interpretation of Coterie and how things work for the undead and supernatural. The locales promised in this series may not be exotic, but it's seeing the world through very different eyes, and I love that.

Would I Recommend This Book? Yeah, give it a go! Personally, I think the reader may be served better actually reading it over listening to the podcast, but that's my opinion only. I give Ghost Train to New Orleans a useless-after-midnight 3 of 5 stars.


For more information on the author, visit http://murverse.com/

Saturday, August 15, 2015

Book Review: Wool Omnibus (Wool #1-#5) by Hugh Howey

Summary

The sherriff of the Silo, Holston, has spent the last three years missing his wife. She was determined to see the outside. It couldn't be as bad as the pictures said, could it? Now, finally at wit's end, Holston has asked to leave the Silo, sure they'll meet on the outside.
With Holston outside the Silo, it's time to replace him. A mechanical, Juliette, is the surprising nomination, but before she can ascend the many levels to the top of the Silo, the people's lives get thrown into turmoil. The mayor is dead, and the next in line is Bernard, the smarmy IT director who never wanted Juliette as sherriff anyway.
Now Juliette finds herself facing the threat of going outside the Silo. Is she going to find Holston out there, or is the world just as deadly as everyone has always thought?


That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from www.hughhowey.com/books/wool/

This is the story of mankind clawing for survival, of mankind on the edge. The world outside has grown unkind, the view of it limited, talk of it forbidden. But there are always those who hope, who dream. These are the dangerous people, the residents who infect others with their optimism. Their punishment is simple. They are given the very thing they profess to want: They are allowed outside.

Context
With all the threats of human destruction and terrorism, and knowing that we've gone so far as to drop atomic bombs on one another before, it's interesting to think what backup plans humanity could develop to live for just one more generation. Howey addresses this with his Silo, a self-contained underground city complete with farms, mechanics, cafeterias, and government. Even better, he's chosen to set Wool at a time when people have been in the Silo for so long that it isn't new. It's the way life is. There wasn't life outside the Silo. Rare people wonder about the world outside. It's a brilliant setting, and Howey addresses a lot of the questions both we as outsiders and the characters living it have.

Style
Howey has a very clear, almost simplistic style that really sets the stage for his work. Words serve the story, and he gives neither too much nor too little in description. He does excel at dialogue. The characters are very real and speak that way. Through their words and thoughts, he really gets the reader into his characters' heads, driving their actions. There was no need for him to make up a lot of strange machines or anything for his claustrophobic setting. It kept there from being a gap between what modern readers could relate to and what his characters consider everyday objects. This sort of thing could have easily gotten too strange and confusing. Howey avoided the potential for a trap of foreign creations.

My Thoughts
I was completely sucked into the setting and how people lived in this place. Uppers, Middies, and the Deep Down are different locations with different populations. Being one massive structure still creates divisions between people. There's economy and class, and it shows in how people perceive and interact with one another.
Sadly, Wool wasn't able to keep my intrigue once the newness wore off. The Omnibus is 5 individual stories that are linked, and it was about halfway through the fourth one that my interest really flagged. I did have to drag myself through the last third or so of the book, and I was glad once it was over. I did like how everything ended, so don't think there was a disappointing resolution. I just lost interest, and the book never seemed to want to pull it back. I think it might have been because the action started to split between a few different pods of characters, and there were too many of them that I just didn't really care about. The story did need it, but it didn't draw me in like it could have.

Would I Recommend This Book? Yes and no. I loved the setting Howey created, and the characters were true to human nature. It's a fantastic premise he's got, and there are tons of stories he can tell here. I adored a fair few of the characters (and hated a few that are worthy of it), but it wasn't enough to keep my interest high throughout. The writing, though, is excellent, and because of that, I give Wool Omnibus a heat-taped 4 of 5 stars.

For more information on the author, visit http://www.hughhowey.com/

Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Book Review Double Whammy: Edgelanders and Sorrow's Peak by Jennifer Melzer

Edgelanders  
Summary
Lorelei's fiance planned to kill her, so she ran. Fleeing for her life, Lorelei, sheltered princess, had no hope. She's lost and alone, far from the home she never got to leave before.

Then the U'lfer found her, a race of wolf-men exiled to a tiny strip of land by Lorelei's father. Mad Finn the Reckless rescued her, only to face exile for his mad actions. Now, banished to the frozen wastes of Rimian, Finn and Lorelei have to stay alive. What's worse, the U'lfer's seers prophecied that Lorelei would be the savior of the dying U'lfer race, and Lorelei is, in fact, half U'lfer herself.

Torn between a past she never knew she had and a future she doesn't want, Lorelei has the weight of an entire race on her shoulders, and a god she doesn't worship pushing her along. Not to mention the devotion of Finn, whose heart she can feel beating with her own.

This was not what she expected the world to be like.

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://jennifermelzer.com/books/serpent-of-time/edgelanders/

When Princess Lorelei of Leithe overhears her fiancĂ©’s plot to murder her on the way to their wedding, she does the only smart thing: she runs.
Into the Edgelands, the savage, woodland home of the legendary U’lfer, a race of fierce wolves who walk as men, she knows she is as good as dead, but she would rather be torn apart by werewolves than die by Trystay’s hand.
A young U’lfer warrior named Finn catches her scent on the wind and finds himself possessed by an unnatural desire to shield and protect her from that which hunts her. From the moment he first sees her, Finn knows she is his. He feels her heartbeat, knows her soul as well as he knows his own, and he will do anything, even suffer exile from the Edgelands to be with her.
But there is more to Lorelei than meets the eye. She is like Finn; there is U’lfer blood in her veins, a beast beneath her skin she never knew was there. The answers she seeks lie south, in the frozen tundra of Rimian, where a village of people just like her have been waiting for Lorelei to come and save them since before she was even born.

Context
Edgelanders is a little hard to nail down, because it isn't the sort of "standard" fantasy that people tend to think of. It's not the sort of English knights/Medieval period, and it's not the orcs/goblins/Tolkein-ish world.

That. Is. Wonderful. Edgelanders sits on its own, breaking the mold for setting. Personally, I see a lot of Gaelic and Norse influence here... more Norse than Gaelic, I think, though, and it's a great mix. the naming conventions differ from what I'm accustomed to seeing in fantasy fiction, and it lends itself to a rich world that's unlike anything I've seen before. Oh, there are elves and trolls, but they're done differently from the Tolkein elves and trolls that they're entirely different races in their own. In fact, the elves have a different sort of name for themselves, Alviarii, though they are still informally called elves.

It's a refreshingly different setting Melzer has created for her world, and there is a lot of greatness to explore. It does make there a little bit of a learning curve for those who, like me, get sort of "stuck" in the more common Western European fantasy-type worlds, but it's a welcome enough change that I didn't mind the unfamiliarity.



Style

Melzer's writing style and my personal reading style have a little bit of a gap between them. It felt to me like she should read quickly, but I felt like the book dragged along for me, and I couldn't read for long periods of time before my eyes started glossing over. It's not a matter of subject of it being boring or overcomplex. Honestly, I don't know why there was that sort of disjoint that made this book hard to finish for me. It took me much longer to finish Edgelanders than it should have, though, and that's a little unsettling.

My Thoughts
I liked Edgelanders quite a bit, but it's one of those books that, for me, had a lot of little nagging problems that detracted from my enjoyment of it. Little things, like there being too many names of characters and places that were similar. Drekne, Deken, and Dunvarak; Rimian, Rivenn, Rognar, Ruwena, Rhiorna, and Roggi; Lorelei, Logren, and Leithe. In some ways, it just felt like Melzer got stuck on a few letters, and they all got used at the expense of other letters. It made keeping track of people and places a little difficult, but not much.

There was a lot of repetition of ideas. Almost any time we had Finn's point-of-view, he was always mooning and harping over how afraid he was that Lorelei would shun him or never accept him as a mate... only days after they met. I understand that it was a driving force for him, but I got a little sick of these sorts of things always popping up in his thoughts. I think if some of that repetition had been toned down across all the characters, it would have made the book flow faster (for me, at least) and smoothed things out, but that's a personal aesthetic.

Throughout much of the book, I felt like there was something lacking, and it was during the epilogue (which was, in my opinion, the most intriguing part of the book) that I realized what it was: there was no real clear personification of an antagonist. It wasn't until the epilogue that I saw Trystay again, and holy cow, did his presence make a huge difference in the urgency of the plot! Frankly, it brings up my hopes that book two of this series will be better, which isn't to say this book was bad. To me, it felt like a prologue... one really long prologue to the real story.

Would I Recommend This Book? I'm actually going to hold off on recommending it or not until I read the next book. If it leads in the way I think it will, then yeah, I'd say read it, but I don't feel comfortable making that call right now. This book is well-written, though I did have some personal preference problems with it. I hope the next book brings the intrigue of the story up to fill the world like it should. I will, though, give Edgelanders a foreseen 3 of 5 stars.

Sorrow's Peak
Summary
Fate is calling to Lorelei. Finally safe from her murderous fiance, she's learned that reawakening the wolf-spirits of the U'lfer is up to her. There is a task she must undertake, waking and destroying the Serpent of Time to end the vicious repetitive cycle of time the world has been in. As has happened uncounted times, Lorelei sets out with Finn and Brendolowyn. Her heart is still torn between the two men, and they're at one another's throats. Is this bickering over her the cause of their constant failure and time's repetition? Will they be able to break the cycle once and for all?

Fate says only two of them will return. Who will be coming back with Lorelei?

That's my summary. Here's the one I pulled from http://jennifermelzer.com/books/serpent-of-time/sorrows-peak/

Once a princess of Leithe, Lorelei was exiled from her homeland and led to the city of Dunvarak in the tundra of Rimian. The people of Dunvarak call her Light of Madra, and nearly every one of them has a story about the white hand of light who saved them from death during the War of Silence.
She is their savior, and being a savior is no small task.
Charged with retrieving the fractured horns of the U’lfer god, Llorveth, from a long-dead dragon’s treasure hoard in the belly of Great Sorrow’s Peak, the half-bred U’lfer believe with the horns in hand they will finally be able to embrace the dormant wolf, and rise to stand beside their full-blooded brethren in the coming war with men.
But there is more to Lorelei’s plight than simply retrieving the mystical horns of a silent god. She and her companions, Finn, an U’lfer warrior she shares a mate bond with, and a half-Alvarii mage named Brendolowyn, have made this journey before, and unless they can figure out where they went wrong in past cycles, time threatens to repeat itself for eternity.

My Thoughts
Sorrow's Peak picks up right where Edgelanders left off, so it's a pleasant, pretty  much nonexistent segue into the continuing story. I was treated immediately to more of the character I really want to know more about, Trystay, but it was brief. And I didn't get to see him again until the epilogue, but he is an antagonist, so I suppose it's not surprising. He's not even really the main conflict in this novel, but it is good to see what he's up to.

My intrigue with Trystay doesn't mean I'm not interested in our protagonist team. Lorelei is evolving, though I'd like to see her grow more quickly. She seems so resistant to change, but not intentionally. In some ways, the world is pushing her along, and she's helpless to stop it. It does sometimes make her come across as whiny, and I want to slap her sometimes, but it's hard to hate her. She's not my favorite protagonist ever, but her chemistry with her teammates makes up for a lot of frustration I have at her. I think if the book were more exclusively in her POV, I wouldn't be able to stand it.

Bren and Finn make the story in a lot of ways. Their bickering, their turmoil, seems more real than Lorelei's does, at least to me. Finn's continued pining after Lorelei, along with Bren's, get annoying. A lot. But it does have a little more purpose now, as they're really set against each other with the whole "only two will return" thing. This really comes to a crux with Bren, and I enjoyed the tension there.

Then there's the side plot, which is headed by my favorite character, Vilnjar. I want more of him. I love that his story arc has diverged from the main story, and I'm eager to see what becomes of him in book three. Yes, I'm curious to see what becomes of everyone, but his story arc appeals to me more than the main one does. That's just personal preference and has nothing to do with the writing quality or plot quality. That is purely opinion.

Would I Recommend This Book? Sure! While I'm not a die-hard fan of many of these characters, and the plot doesn't particularly resonate with me, this is a well-written and well-developed world and novel, and I believe there is something in here for most readers. It is a little on the solemn side, and maybe that's where my taste gets upset. I will be back for the next book, though. I give Sorrow's Peak an underground 4 of 5 stars.
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